Long time...
This one is to all the bright women whom I was fortunate to know, while not being so privileged themselves...for obvious reasons...
No hard feelings...
Here goes...
I thought I could sense her
Her dreamy eyes I had always known
Her becoming smile made her my own
Fragrance familiar as my skin
All bearings to my heart akin
Said could never hurt me
Proclaimed,” Can’t live sans thee”
I felt we were destiny's own
A frequency seldom hatched
Chemistry, they said was unmatched
The fights were a course in escalating love
Sweet tranquil moments replenished like a paired dove
Profusion of an occasional honey-coated kiss
Reality or dream was this bliss?
Then the contrast came to the fore
Perturbing her every other moment
Like an eyesore
I was stagnant and paunchy
Contrary to the prince charming
Of her sanity
Each habit seemed to irritate to the core
How can one love any more?
All castles came crushing down
With a gust of materiality
Part did I with hell full of pain
An ironic yet bitter eventuality
Eyes still ache
With even the slightest immaturity
Of an amorous daydream
Nights choking with hysterity
Venturing along to fathom my alter ego
An untrodden body and soul
Myriad countenance of a woman
A frown occasionally stole
Icy images of separation
Can ever break this chain?
Man struggling to decipher
The deepest desires of a woman
All in vain!
Trudging a confessed formidable way
Playing my destiny’s game
3 comments:
nice personal experience bro..well written..but i felt that tough words are used, seems a force not natural...
cool
keep writing!
Monica again..seems u r hurt in luv..bt dn't wry..u wil gt sm1 soon..my wishes r wid u..
hmm so something on love
"love is a temporary madness" -sigmund freud
the lanes of life have sticks and stones
sound of the breaking heart and the cracking bones
the mirror of reflection cracked down
the translucent potrait of affection still under construction
the rationality again gone for destruction
expectation are made when we realise its time for the situation to fade
why cant we let go?for we know there is nothing to hold on to
why cant we let it be,for we know there is nothing to acuuse to for the misery in us
for whom shall we blame for our distrust
we never expect so much from ourselves
but the irony lies tat we expect the world from the supposedly other half
the tears need a reson to flow
the mind needs a reason to re draw the lines of sanity and insanity
the heart needs a reason to pump extra blood and cover up for its involuntary reactions
Most of all the existance needs a reason to ponder upon and to reddem itself and to prove to your own soul
YOU EXIST!!!
these are just ways
expecataion wash away because we put it all on others
why do so when we know nothing stands,when not even our own selves then how come someone else will
Anu
P.S :I may be rong also coz i have never felt so in my life
bt this is my take on crying over letting sum1 go
nd remeber if some1 wants to stay they will stay back no matter what,else it happens other wise
KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!
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